Hii friends, i am new on this forum and would like to use this as a platform for my writing skill. I am posting one of my quotes here and would like you all to read and leave a feedback...
"Akele baithe the kal teri yaadon ne humein ghair liya
lab muskura rahe the par aansuon ne aankhon ko bhigo diya,
Poochha humne dil se ki unse agli mulakat kab hogi
jo adhuri reh gayi thi woh baat kab hogi,
Dil ne kaha kuch rishte adhure hee achhe hote hain
beshak dur sahi par inmein pyar ke ehsaas sache hote hain."
i'll be waiting for your replies