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PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:56 pm 
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Well, I recently wrote some lyrical songs ...

Here is one of them titled Cause you're away

Do you know why I cry at night?
Do you wonder why stars are no longer bright?
Ever asked why do I look so pale right now?
Just one reason please don’t ask me how.

Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?

Do you know why my life is so tasteless?
Do you know why I become so helpless?
Ever asked why do I tremble now?
Just one reason don't please ask me how.

Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?

Do you know why I long for you?
If you do …
If you ever knew,

You just won't …
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?


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libra&libra wrote:
Well, I recently wrote some lyrical songs ...

Here is one of them titled Cause you're away

Do you know why I cry at night?
Do you wonder why stars are no longer bright?
Ever asked why do I look so pale right now?
Just one reason please don’t ask me how.

Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?

Do you know why my life is so tasteless?
Do you know why I become so helpless?
Ever asked why do I tremble now?
Just one reason don't please ask me how.

Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?

Do you know why I long for you?
If you do …
If you ever knew,

You just won't …
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?


Libra.


Aside from the few typos I think it's beautiful. Is it finished? KUDOS!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 6:29 am 
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That's really beautiful.


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who knows & potterpoet .. thanks indeed.


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:29 am 
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Here I am with another lyrical song, I just felt writing today entitled Look in your eyes

When I look in your eyes
all my fear crumbles & dies …
something about those eyes.

Something indescribable takes place,
Its your sweet lovely face,
As I run after you to embrace ..
the beauty and softness I can't replace.

That's when I look in your eyes
all my fear crumbles & dies …
something about those eyes.

The moment I gaze at you,
Nothing to be compared that's true
I forget moments I was so blue
Now you came with incredible clue.

That's now when I close my eyes,
Nothing compared to your eyes
All my fear now dies …
Can't you see,
'am lost in those eyes.

* A dedication to all pure hearts in this world.


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Thank you for showing it to us. it's really great.


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potterpoet, I appreciate it.


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:21 am 
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I can see in their blank stares,
that not one of them really cares
I want to tell them how I feel,
to let them know my thoughts are real
just won't go away this deeply etched scar
not simple enough to be washed away by a star
This numbness seeping through me, I want it to go
If these feelings can't stop, they might overflow.

IF I MAY ADD TO IT

...Drowning the soul that possesses it
For want of outlet
Steering the numbness
With no blank stares


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