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libra&libra
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 Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:18 pm |
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Well, I recently wrote some lyrical songs ...
Here is one of them titled Cause you're away
Do you know why I cry at night?
Do you wonder why stars are no longer bright?
Ever asked why do I look so pale right now?
Just one reason please don’t ask me how.
Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Do you know why my life is so tasteless?
Do you know why I become so helpless?
Ever asked why do I tremble now?
Just one reason don't please ask me how.
Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Do you know why I long for you?
If you do …
If you ever knew,
You just won't …
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Libra.
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1whoknows
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Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:40 pm |
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libra&libra wrote: Well, I recently wrote some lyrical songs ...
Here is one of them titled Cause you're away
Do you know why I cry at night?
Do you wonder why stars are no longer bright?
Ever asked why do I look so pale right now?
Just one reason please don’t ask me how.
Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Do you know why my life is so tasteless?
Do you know why I become so helpless?
Ever asked why do I tremble now?
Just one reason don't please ask me how.
Cause you are away,
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Do you know why I long for you?
If you do …
If you ever knew,
You just won't …
Gone so far …
Left me away
Please tell me why?
Libra.
Aside from the few typos I think it's beautiful. Is it finished? KUDOS!
~Knows
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libra&libra
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 7:05 am |
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who knows & potterpoet .. thanks indeed.
Libra.
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libra&libra
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:29 am |
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Here I am with another lyrical song, I just felt writing today entitled Look in your eyes
When I look in your eyes
all my fear crumbles & dies …
something about those eyes.
Something indescribable takes place,
Its your sweet lovely face,
As I run after you to embrace ..
the beauty and softness I can't replace.
That's when I look in your eyes
all my fear crumbles & dies …
something about those eyes.
The moment I gaze at you,
Nothing to be compared that's true
I forget moments I was so blue
Now you came with incredible clue.
That's now when I close my eyes,
Nothing compared to your eyes
All my fear now dies …
Can't you see,
'am lost in those eyes.
* A dedication to all pure hearts in this world.
Libra.
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potterpoet357
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:07 pm |
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Thank you for showing it to us. it's really great.
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libra&libra
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:01 am |
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potterpoet, I appreciate it.
Libra.
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CHRISLYN
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:21 am |
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I can see in their blank stares,
that not one of them really cares
I want to tell them how I feel,
to let them know my thoughts are real
just won't go away this deeply etched scar
not simple enough to be washed away by a star
This numbness seeping through me, I want it to go
If these feelings can't stop, they might overflow.
IF I MAY ADD TO IT
...Drowning the soul that possesses it
For want of outlet
Steering the numbness
With no blank stares
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