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I found this link in another forum. Send me a private message if you can find anything wrong with this article, and if you reach the right conclusion, you get mad props!

http://65.127.124.62/south_asia/4483241.stm.htm

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The link doesn't work pal, at least not at this very moment.

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"Follow me," the wise man said, but he walked behind...

hmmm... that is odd.. I copy pasted, but it doesn't work... If I figure anthing out, I'll repost the link...

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It works now. Very funny nearly caught me out.

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"The Truth may be out there but the lies are in your head"
"I tend to think if God wanted us to believe in him he'd exist."

Gill,
Thats just freaky okay!

Alright, so whats wrong with this article? Well I'm just taking some stabs at this, but I can name quite a few things.

1. How is a person supposed to die in fewer than 2 days?
That would be negative days, and in this world, I don't think thats possible. They need to learn to word things more accurately.

2. In the second paragraph after the word person there needs to be a comma.

3.

Lets think about this one. How is it possible for it to be contained? What, did they create, some virus or repelant that kills off every mosquitoe. It will take a lot more to contain something like that. Especially if the bug is native to the region.

4. What was Condoleeza Rice thinking? Is she trying to kill us all? Oh yeah! Sure, they would have probably figured out that they could use it as a biological weapon, but did she really have to give them the idea?

Let me know if any of these are right.

Winks,
Raven

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"You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)

Tell you what look at the day it was published.
EDIT: Just noticed the words winks. Now confused.

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"The Truth may be out there but the lies are in your head"
"I tend to think if God wanted us to believe in him he'd exist."

It was published April 1st. So does that mean it was an April fools joke? Or was it just published that day by coincidence? Wow! that was the one thing I didn't catch.



Sigsfried,
What is that supposed to mean? Either I'm really tired right now, or you just confused me big time.

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"You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)

Well I thought you had actually realised it was an old April's fool after all you were taking apart the grammar that I thought you must have spotted the date.

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"The Truth may be out there but the lies are in your head"
"I tend to think if God wanted us to believe in him he'd exist."

Really sigsfried I'm not dense, but that I didn't catch that makes me feel that way.

The reason why I was picking apart grammar was because I was full of the devil yesterday and I had to be a little sarcastic. Hence the winks.

Raven

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"You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)

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what? so it's fake? (thank god)
also at first the artical says virus, then parisite
^viruses arn't conculivly living or dead. they have DNA, but not all the prosses of life

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send me money

Well at least I know I wasn't the only one. I don't feel so bad now...lol!

Raven

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"You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)

huh?

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All great things are simple, and many can be expressed in single words: freedom, justice, honor, duty, mercy, hope.
Sir Winston Churchill
British politician (1874 - 1965)

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http://65.127.124.62/south_asia/4483241.stm.htm

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"You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)