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 Post subject: Pick up the rose
PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:18 am 
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Pick up the rose
Look at it in close
Notice it seems froze
Her only tears get drown in snow
All over the row
Her tears froze from pains
In past they were like rains
No one care rubs out them
Or just wiped them
No one saw her inner beautifulness
They pluck it for their happiness
For only her fragrance
Neglected it is own insurance
No wonder how it pains
No meaning for claims
Just give it chance to live
It deserves to live
Only it seems froze
As no one care
Or get to see in close
So now you pick it
Pick up the rose
Try to wipe the froze tears
After it gone!!!...



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PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 2:52 pm 
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i like the flow of this arty. did you write? if you did, you are very talented. i never seem to be able to get any of my poetryt o rhyme, but i did write a song that does.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 3:13 pm 
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Arty is very artistic...

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:35 pm 
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Kosra87 wrote:
i like the flow of this arty. did you write? if you did, you are very talented. i never seem to be able to get any of my poetryt o rhyme, but i did write a song that does.


:) YEA I WRITE IT, ,THANKS FOR PASSING

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:36 pm 
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ishrat wrote:
Arty is very artistic...

:) THANKS ISHRAT , ITIS KIND FROM YOU ...

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You are Welcome Arty.... Your place Cairo is a beautiful place as well.. I was thinking of visiting it but left it for next year.. I'll ask you to find must visit places when I do visit..

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:01 am 
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ishrat wrote:
You are Welcome Arty.... Your place Cairo is a beautiful place as well.. I was thinking of visiting it but left it for next year.. I'll ask you to find must visit places when I do visit..

YEA ITIS NICE PLACE , YOU WELCOME IN EGYPT

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:54 pm 
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Here's one of mine.

When I close my eyes
When I close my eyes
It is your face I see
When you’re near you touch me
Deep within my fragile frame
Envelope me in your arms
I could stay forever
The tears start rolling from my eyes
I know this can not be
Not belonging pains me
In ways you’ll never know
Keeping up this passion
Will kill me in the end
The candle burning
Within my soul
Flickers, blows and sputters
Tell myself I do not care
I know I can not lie
Growing ever tighter
The chains around my heart
Become heavier and heavier
With every passing hour
You’re face I feel
I must forget
You’re touch
Must be forgotten
If ever this all consuming pain
Were to disappear

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:58 pm 
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Kosra87 wrote:
Here's one of mine.

When I close my eyes
When I close my eyes
It is your face I see
When you’re near you touch me
Deep within my fragile frame
Envelope me in your arms
I could stay forever
The tears start rolling from my eyes
I know this can not be
Not belonging pains me
In ways you’ll never know
Keeping up this passion
Will kill me in the end
The candle burning
Within my soul
Flickers, blows and sputters
Tell myself I do not care
I know I can not lie
Growing ever tighter
The chains around my heart
Become heavier and heavier
With every passing hour
You’re face I feel
I must forget
You’re touch
Must be forgotten
If ever this all consuming pain
Were to disappear

NICE FEELINGS AND WORDS KOSRA,

When you’re near you touch me
Deep within my fragile frame
Envelope me in your arms
I could stay forever
The tears start rolling from my eyes
I know this can not be
Not belonging pains me
In ways you’ll never know
Keeping up this passion
Will kill me in the end
The candle burning....U HAVE DEEP FEELING IN THIS LINES

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:21 pm 
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Tanks and airplanes Arty.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 2:29 am 
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Kosra87 wrote:
Tanks and airplanes Arty.


LOL :wink:

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