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 Post subject: Sky-Lit Candles
PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:41 am 
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A flicker of glame
Candle lit
Weak
Yet unrelenting
Meek
Yet unweakening.

More flickers
Dotting across
A map
A web
Lost in its own
Staggering constellations.

Shining, forming
A sea of glowing
Sand
An ethereal
Land
An never ending
Bend.

Uncountable flickers, drowned
In its glory
Crowned
The Elixir of All Stories
Sounded
A symphony of fury.

They are proud
They claim loud,
" For what may weave
For what may sow
Without us
Inspiring Soul?"

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Tell me what you think about this please? Coz I really don't know how bad or how good it is.


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I think its good. The rhyming is nice.

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