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 Post subject: Sharing my poetry
PostPosted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:06 am 
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You think your thoughts
but don't express.
You come to be
when you're a mess.
It's jottin' time
oh can't you see.
Open your eyes
I bid you free.
Here come the spells
that bring you home.
Maybe crazy
I don't know.
But who's to say
Love stays tragic.
Meet with me and
bring your magic.
Tears are shining
overspilling.
Peace and Harmony
God be willing.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:09 am 
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NICE FEELING :)

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 7:30 am 
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Wow thats really amazing!! I wish I could write like that

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:43 am 
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Great poem. Two lines that don't fit the meter, though. "I don't know" and "Peace and Harmony". All the other lines have 4 syllables each, but those have 3 and 5. But other than that, I think it's really good

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 Post subject: your good
PostPosted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 5:45 pm 
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Dang I wish I could write like that you got real skills. The last time I tried to write a poem everyone thought it sucked.

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