Quotations and Literature Forum

You think your thoughts
but don't express.
You come to be
when you're a mess.
It's jottin' time
oh can't you see.
Open your eyes
I bid you free.
Here come the spells
that bring you home.
Maybe crazy
I don't know.
But who's to say
Love stays tragic.
Meet with me and
bring your magic.
Tears are shining
overspilling.
Peace and Harmony
God be willing.

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Have Fun, Good Luck.

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You Are Who You Are

Wow thats really amazing!! I wish I could write like that

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If you are a dreamer come in, if you are a dreamer, a whisher, a hoper, a prayer, a magic bean byer,
If you are a pretender come site by my fire, for we have flax golden tales to spin, come in, come in

Great poem. Two lines that don't fit the meter, though. "I don't know" and "Peace and Harmony". All the other lines have 4 syllables each, but those have 3 and 5. But other than that, I think it's really good

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"That's the trouble with life. You're happy for 5 seconds, then something starts ringing." -The Drowsy Chaperone

Dang I wish I could write like that you got real skills. The last time I tried to write a poem everyone thought it sucked.

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-you never know until you try