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 Post subject: my poem?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 2:08 pm 
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hay, I think I thought of this poem yesterday, but it might be a famous work that just re-surfaced in my mind. anyone reconize it?

Down a long and winding road
I walk though darkness never told
I see a light, so clean and pure
Now my steps are always sure

any help would be apprecated

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PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2006 1:32 pm 
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What are you describing you doing? Like is it metophorical? or are you just walking down a road :?:


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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 12:25 pm 
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Dear birght-shadow,

I fear that if it is a name of a poem that you assumed you got those lines from, I can be of no help. All I can say is that if it is from a famous poem, I also need the name. But if the work is yours, I must congratulate you, for I have not read work that has moved me so much since my dear E. A. P.'s The Raven. I hope that you have created it yourself, because that would mean the world has a new legendary poet.

Good luck and,

As always, Your loyal citizen "Codename V"


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 Post subject: Re: my poem?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 4:32 am 
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bright-shadow wrote:
hay, I think I thought of this poem yesterday, but it might be a famous work that just re-surfaced in my mind. anyone reconize it?

Down a long and winding road
I walk though darkness never told
I see a light, so clean and pure
Now my steps are always sure

any help would be apprecated

not anything i've seen

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 6:16 am 
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Bright-shadow

Does not ring a bell with me, searched a couple of places for key phrases and find nothing similar. Probably original.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:32 pm 
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I'm guessing it is original also. I could find nothing on the web to link up to it. it is truly a fine peice.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:35 pm 
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This is a Randi Lynn Original. You'll find it online.

Veil
In my world
The darkness people fear
Find everything that could be good
I no longer fear it
For it has been here so long
All I can do is hope
That one day
I'll be able to cut that veil
But right now all it does
Is stretch and spring back
No matter how hard I pull and tug
I want it to tear
It's been there so long
I realize it now
I've finally grown comfortable
And that really scares you
For how can I have grown comfortable
With what I fear the most

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 2:50 pm 
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Hmmm...That is Great Bright-Shadow. I feel bad that I didn't see this sooner. It has been a long time since you have made an appearance here. Hopefully you will come back.

As for the poem, I think it is absolutely beautiful.

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 Post subject: Re: my poem?
PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 10:52 am 
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bright-shadow wrote:
hay, I think I thought of this poem yesterday, but it might be a famous work that just re-surfaced in my mind. anyone reconize it?

Down a long and winding road
I walk though darkness never told
I see a light, so clean and pure
Now my steps are always sure

any help would be apprecated


Well, It's the first time i have stared at it.I think it hold power to lead souls in the right direction. :)

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It made me think of a christian, or muslim, guided by his belief.

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Good, very good...
I see thoughts all the way... good to see people putting in their thoughts like that. 8)

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:29 am 
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very nice - i feel that t full engish word should be used in poetry/quotes

what is t meaning of
' Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori'


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Salve, patsm!
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ooh I love that poem!

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