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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:00 am |
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animalaia wrote: did that make any sense?
Not in the slighest.
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animalaia
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:06 am |
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excellent then.  after reading it i agree, it didn't. when i wrote my line for the poem there was already tw different lines for I but i only saw the line that, what is now called, poem 2 used and so thats the line i wrote my line for. i wrote my j line for poem two. did that make any more sense?
_________________ "In my time, nightmares walked among us, skewering victims in plain sight...This to make us laugh. And now nightmares are trapped inside the heads of humans...I wonder whom they angered so to merit such a fate?"
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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:22 am |
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I need to keep up with my ballads... It's the weekend so I just woke up... I should get back on track during the week... Maybe I'll just write them random times.
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Nahwatah Ravenheart
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:45 pm |
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Poem # 1
Alone I sit and ponder,
Beside myself with grief,
Crumbling are my walls
Despairingly I watch my world collapse
Everything has gone out of reach.
Far beyond the walls of infinity,
Gathering my soul, I sit and wait,
Hounds a many, yet angels so few,
Innocent eyes watch as they dispute,
Just try not to get caught up in it all, I would hate to have to mourn you too.
Kindly I am given reprieve from the upset before my eyes,
Laughing, I suddenly wonder if this is another trick in disguise.
Merely an illusion set to deceive
Nothing dwells within me but hope
Raven
_________________ "You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)
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Nahwatah Ravenheart
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:48 pm |
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Okay! I went back and figured out what you meant Animalia. Joker alreasdy made a "J" for poem two now. Wow! this thing is getting really complicated. Sorry! I screwed up back there by just missing one line.
Raven
_________________ "You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)
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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:14 pm |
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Out of the darkness a light, I see
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rnassar_7
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:29 pm |
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Perhaps an illusion though
_________________ 'One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.'
~Sophocles
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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:36 pm |
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Quill pens write swiftly on the parchment
I had to say something here
I had to say something starting with "Qu"
So just ignore this and look below
A morbid thought, though I'm reassured
I'm in the sun, my symptoms cured
But then I know I'm in the dark
I'm ingorant of what's going on...
Yet, with happiness comes ingorance
Or so that's what they say
But "'F'" that.", I said
I'm perfectly happy this way
_________________ Christopher Grant Burks
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rnassar_7
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 1:49 pm |
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Quote: Yet, with happiness comes ingorance
how come? I've been doing alooot of thinking abt happiness lately, so an explanation would help! thx
Rana
_________________ 'One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.'
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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 3:50 pm |
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Ignorance is bliss...
_________________ Christopher Grant Burks
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Nahwatah Ravenheart
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:47 pm |
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Remembering this day as if,
Something I had missed
Raven
_________________ "You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)
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Webbratz
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:49 pm |
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Raven you missed "Q" I think.
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Nahwatah Ravenheart
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:51 pm |
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Quote: Quill pens write swiftly on the parchment
I Took his line, and added it in the poem.
Raven
_________________ "You must learn there is a time to speak all of the truth, and a time to govern your tongue."
~Verin (The Wheel of Time)
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FyodorDostoyevsky11
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:57 pm |
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Trying to recapture
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rnassar_7
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:10 am |
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so Fyodor, it's acctually the other way around: with ignorance comes happiness right?
Rana
_________________ 'One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.'
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