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did that make any sense?


Not in the slighest.

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excellent then. :wink: after reading it i agree, it didn't. when i wrote my line for the poem there was already tw different lines for I but i only saw the line that, what is now called, poem 2 used and so thats the line i wrote my line for. i wrote my j line for poem two. did that make any more sense?

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I need to keep up with my ballads... It's the weekend so I just woke up... I should get back on track during the week... Maybe I'll just write them random times.

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Poem # 1

Alone I sit and ponder,
Beside myself with grief,
Crumbling are my walls
Despairingly I watch my world collapse
Everything has gone out of reach.
Far beyond the walls of infinity,
Gathering my soul, I sit and wait,
Hounds a many, yet angels so few,
Innocent eyes watch as they dispute,
Just try not to get caught up in it all, I would hate to have to mourn you too.
Kindly I am given reprieve from the upset before my eyes,
Laughing, I suddenly wonder if this is another trick in disguise.
Merely an illusion set to deceive
Nothing dwells within me but hope

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Okay! I went back and figured out what you meant Animalia. Joker alreasdy made a "J" for poem two now. Wow! this thing is getting really complicated. Sorry! I screwed up back there by just missing one line.

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Out of the darkness a light, I see

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Perhaps an illusion though

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Quill pens write swiftly on the parchment
I had to say something here
I had to say something starting with "Qu"
So just ignore this and look below

A morbid thought, though I'm reassured
I'm in the sun, my symptoms cured
But then I know I'm in the dark
I'm ingorant of what's going on...

Yet, with happiness comes ingorance
Or so that's what they say
But "'F'" that.", I said
I'm perfectly happy this way

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Yet, with happiness comes ingorance

how come? I've been doing alooot of thinking abt happiness lately, so an explanation would help! thx :)

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Ignorance is bliss...

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Remembering this day as if,
Something I had missed

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Raven you missed "Q" I think.


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Quill pens write swiftly on the parchment


I Took his line, and added it in the poem.

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so Fyodor, it's acctually the other way around: with ignorance comes happiness right?

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