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PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 11:36 pm 
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Location: My heart
She walks there in her white
Her eyes shining bright
Her love strong like the night birds song
As she whispers into the night
The words so dark and grim
"I hate him"


The Cyclone
The cyclone is coming,
We hear the children cry,
As they run into there houses,
Excitement in their eyes,
Oh how I wish,
That I was one of them,
Not realising the danger,
Until it has been spent,
But I am the one,
Who must worry for the safety,
Of those little ones,
As the cyclone comes,
And takes away the smallest one,
I cry out in the night,
As in my dreams I see,
My darling daughter being taken from me.

((I was relly hyper when I wrote this one and my friend gave me the first two lines))

There are children throwing snowballs, instead of throwing heads!
There busy building toys and absolutely no ones dead!
They run around happily not going mad at all!
Unlike us Demons, we will eat their souls!

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:36 pm 
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lol...that last one is funny. ^-^ I should post some of _my_ poetry sometime...*shrugs* Most of it is sad, tho...

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 11:58 am 
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I liked the ending part of the second one. It was sad. I have a thing for tradegy. Somehow i think it gives writings more feeling, pulls a little more at the emotions .

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