Quotations and Literature Forum

Despairing rage
As a prisoner
Pounds the wall of his dungeon
And screams his dying breath
Finality

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"Let others rise to take our place
Until the earth is free!" - Enjolras, Les Miserables

MusicIsLife, do you mind telling me about the poem you posted? Did you write it, and if so, where did you get the inspiration and what was the point you were trying to get across? If not, what about this poem struck you so that you decided to share it? I'd like to hear your opinions

Unfortunately, I did write it. I do not think I can really write poetry, but this was a bit of something I was trying to get down, and at the time struck me as "ok." My inspiration was frustration.
I actually posted it to get other people's opinion's on it.
What do you think? What comes to mind when you read it?

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"Let others rise to take our place
Until the earth is free!" - Enjolras, Les Miserables