Quotations and Literature Forum

Mariantionette- This is a very good piece of work, most probably my favourite of yours that I have read, I've so often remarked and observed how closely tragedy and beauty walk hand in hand. The last line is masterful, the way it is worded, the perfection of the rhythm and linking back to the August sun. I commend you upon the penning of this, sometimes it isn't easy to write with your own emotion, too easily it becomes raw and unfocussed, but this is strong, the rpoduct of forcing your heart into a mangle and brutally putting it back together with erudited brilliance.

-fish are quick!

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