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About your poem:
I must say, you summed it up in your notes at the top:
This is one of those poems you write when you're not feeling so great about yourself, it is one devoid of rationality and is composed ruthlessly
You succesfully convey your emotions, which is what makes this, in my eyes, a masterpiece. Your careful selection of vocabulary hastes the poem in its greatness.
This poem makes me feel sad, very sad, and I feel as if I am feeling and breathing this emotion.
Your imagery deserves a whole essay on its own.
with every metaphysical horse pulling in another way
You describe the feeling so well! In this poem you convey your thoughts much to well, and this poem is bringing me close to tears. Thanks for this.
See ya around Grant.
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: I forgot to check what Semper Eadum
meant. When I found out, I was closer to tears.
Always the same.
Those two lines are really something:
It's me, Semper eadum
I am the desire to my own destruction.