Loved it, my reply remains the same:
Eagerly awaiting its release in poetry. A masterpiece, I must say. Your use of language and punctuation is flawless. You have mastered the rhyme scheme, and created an excellent flow.
I found your last stanza the most powerful:
Bring down my sweet soul, from where it once lay,
And teach me some lesson that I may cling to.
So I may not linger in doubt all this day,
Instead give me heaven to dwell in with you.
I sometimes find it hard reading this type of rhyme scheme, I don't know why, but this stanza just rolls out of my mouth. What a beauty!
Let's just hope we'll be seeing more of your works.