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PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:36 pm 
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I wrote a ''Back Cover'' for my story i haven't yet started...
Is called ''Days Of Hope''.
This is only my imagination so, am... if u don't like those kind of books don't really reply please...

Days Of Hope is a fictional story of a girl from asylum, Alice, which is looking for a real life meaning... Why she should stay alife, and isin’t dead by now after trying to commit a suiciude many times. She still can’t understand anythink when two years in asylum pass, and she is let freedom after acting her change. She becomes a worker in large computer corporation when she finds friends, love and hope of the final understanding...

Please post what u think about this and if somethink could be improved, thank you!


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:01 pm 
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Its song good so far but one thing you need to know is that you cannot find love, love finds you so therefore in your story you should say that love has found her and etc... :idea:


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 9:41 am 
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Enoch Bernard wrote:
Its song good so far but one thing you need to know is that you cannot find love, love finds you so therefore in your story you should say that love has found her and etc... :idea:


Ah, ok! Thanks! ^^


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 10:14 am 
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Your welcome! I will be more than delightful to read more of your stuff anytime. :idea:


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