Oh My! Where to start....
I know that the opinion of a "mere child" like me... won't matter, but I just had to add in exactly what I think....
Firstly, Nostromo, I thank you so much for posting that. I've read it several times now, and each time, I find it more interesting, intriguing and inspiring.
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I know nothing about poetry, I'm a no-talent poet,
The form and the schemes mean nothing to me,
Ahhh, there are no better words for me to sum up my personal "poetic talent". harhar.
I loved the whole rhythm through it, it worked wonders.
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If I start caring too much about the rhythm and rhyme,
The words wouldn't happen and I'd be stuck all the time.
I know what you mean. I've tried poetry a couple of times, the meaning gets somewhat lost when things have to stay in poetic harmony....
I avoid going to bed too....

anything but bed.
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If I've touched someone with any of the words that I say.
You have certainly touched me with this piece...
Nostromo, I loved reading that so very much, its a great piece of writing, truly from the heart, with great language etc....
You really should write more often, I have now read it a couple more times, it really is very good.
You really should give me a few pointers.....

Lord knows I need them...