Quotations and Literature Forum

Though the quotes here have always inspired me for some time, I've started writing a few of my own recently. . I would like someone to guide me if my head is walking in the right direction or my quotes make any sense to the mass here..
so here is the first one..

1. The hour hand of my watch is stuck to the minute hand of my life as the seconds pass-by..

Thanks

The tusk of an elephant reminds me of the extended fine outlook of a human..