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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2003 8:53 am 
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FIrst iimpressions are SOOO... important, Mother always said.

Your first instruction to a new member contains a COMMA (and the expected run-on sentence therefrom) in a place clearly reserved for a SEMI-COLON.

It's located in your short "heads up" about the need for a new initiate to go Home and engage the secret activator in your validation email.

I do recall that the offending COMMA immediately precedes the word "however" in your two-line advisory.


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